Daniel Rick Johnson was born on October 19, 1957. He had an older sister named Judith and a younger sister named, Julia. The family resided in a two story house at 45 Lampkin Lane in the surburban town of Haddonfield Illinois. On October 31, 1963, a six-year old Daniel dressed as a vampire for Halloween and watched his sister & her boyfriend kissing before going upstairs to have sex. Taking a knife out of the kitchen drawer and waiting for Judith's boyfriend to leave, Daniel then snuck up the stairs and repeatedly stabbed his sister to death. After watching her die, he left the house only to be discovered by his astonished parents, who had just returned home.
Michael was sent to a sanitarium for his crime, where he would remain until his twenty-first birthday until he could be tried as an adult. At the sanitarium, Daniel received psychiatric treatment from Dr.Sami Drooms. Upon spending time with the boy, Drooms concluded that it was a hopeless case that Daniel Johnson had no humanity left. He pleaded his case that Johnson be moved to a more secure facility, but his superiors refused to listen and ordered that he remain in the sanitarium. In 1965,Daniel's parents were killed in a car accident, and his little sister was adopted by the Strode family, who renamed her Laurie. The Strodes brought Laurie to visit Michael at the sanitarium on at least one occasion when she was still a little girl.
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