fredag 13 januari 2012

Summarizer - Goldilocks

Summarizer Goldilock
This story is about a little girl named Goldilock. Her name came from her hair, she got golden curly hair. She loves to go out in the forest to take a walk or just relax. She loves wild strawberries and to lie on the dry moss. But one time she met 3 bears. Father bear, Mother bear and Baby Bear.
She walked deep in to the forest and saw a house. She looked through the window and saw som steaming hot porridge on the table. She went in to the house and ate it. 
First she tasted Father bears, but it was waaaay to hot for her. 
then she tasted Mother bears porridge. It was way to cold!
Then she tasted Baby bears porridge and it was perfect!
She tried all their chairs and baby bears was crushed. She tried all the beds too and felt asleep on baby bears bed. 

1 kommentar:

  1. Bra innehåll och stabilt språk. Se upp med hur du tar nytt stycke - byt inte rad efter varje mening.

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